If you have experienced the truth, joy and pain of listening to the words from your favorite story spoken by a trustworthy voice , you will appreciate Anthropologies: A family Memoir by Beth Alvarado. Beth Alvarado evokes comfortable and uncomfortable emotions by crafting relatable environments that hold readers in time and place as if we were there experiencing the turn of events first hand. The question is how does she do it?
The book is divided into three parts, Notes on Silence, Notes on Travel and Notes on Art. The parts function to frame the reader thus the relatable environment begins. In Notes on Silence, Alvarado immediately makes the reader feel comfortable by telling the story in first person. Its as if we are sitting in the small dinning room with Alvarado and her mother listening to the story, savoring the words one by one, anticipating the arrival of the next word before the first one is complete. Additionally, rather than showing us what the environment is, she shows us what the environment isn't. She writes about her mother, "She no longer plays golf. She no longer plays the piano. She no longer paints Chinese watercolors or plays bridge with her friends...she is still beautiful." By telling us what her mother isn't, we get a vivid image of what her mother was and what she is now. In place of long, descriptive narrative about her mother's condition, Alvarado uses concise sentences that tell enough to make the point and create intrigue while making space for the reader to participant in the scene by imagining everything that is not said, For example, "The oxygen machine hums in the background."
Again, When she introduces her drug addition, Alvarado employs the craft of placing the reading in the story. She writes, "There are marks on my arms, but my mother never mentions them." As I read, I imagine myself there in 1972 watching Alvarado in her "black tee shirt, baggy bell bottoms" with marks on her arms wondering how silence can speak so loudly. Admiring the economy of words.
In Notes on Travel, Alvarado uses more description mixed with concise sentences. The concise sentences remind us that we are included in the story. "We plan our extravagant dinner. I will drink a crisp white wine. A grilled artichoke with aioli for starters. Then for the gentleman, sea bass wrapped in a potato crust, tiny spring asparagus on the side." The description is so well done, that I can smell the sea bass and taste the asparagus. Words like "we plan" and "for starters" create a slower pace and allow us to take our time enjoying the environment Alvarado creates. Rather real, dreamed or imagined, its as if we are there as silent observers taking it all in.
Stacy Johnson
Great essay, Stacy! Yes, the slower pace really grounds us in her pie and has us participating, silently, in her memoir. I'm still laughing a bit about that (how we are in HER memoir). Also, good point about how she tells us a lot by telling us what the environment is not. I remember reading a line such as "if you opened the curtains, you would see the golf course" which I found so interesting because it strongly implied that the curtains were not opened often. Little details like that fill the memoir. If there is time in class, we should definitely highlight some of the more powerful ways that Alvarado subtly illustrates her world.
ReplyDeleteStacy,
ReplyDeleteI like that you’ve pulled this part out of text (about the markings on the arm). It clearly is a craft choice of the authors to use visual imagery opposed to words.
The mother’s character is depicted as portraying language without the use of words. I.e.: The pennies in her hand, symbolic of advise to go to Europe, while placing necessary distance between her and her boyfriend. What’s clear is that Elizabeth’s view from below or eyelevel to the ironing board is not obscured. In this example, and in the scene where her mother sees her drug marks, the narrator understands what’s at stake. She’s simply left with making the decision and the consequences that follow.
Thanks for sharing,
Brit
Great Stacy,
ReplyDeletewhat i like about your entry is how you focus on how this applies to your own structure and journey in your writing. The silences are so absolute in these vignettes that one looks at the descriptions voraciously. the layering is so interesting.
carry on
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Stacy,
ReplyDeleteYou are so right to point out how she builds characters by saying in parts what is missing. It is one of her ways of building character in scenes that she had no way of being a part of, no way of truly knowing how people were thinking or feeling.
I too noticed the change in the Language in the beginning of the Travel section of the memoir. It was much more focused on the moment.
Great insights.
Best,
CF